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Terrific

A cut above the usual attempts of horror here. This was genuine quality.

Catchy music.

This isn't too bad, and I don't think it will get blammed. There are steps that could have been taken to turn this from a mild attempt at humour to something really funny, and might even be worth bringing back to the drawing board for a new attempt. A good start would be taking the time to hand draw your Evian bottles, like you do everything else. If it looks like you're avoiding work to us, it'll come across as a rushed film in the end. Otherwise, it was alright.

Worth resubmitting after a month or so.

It's a nice idea which could develop into something quite entertaining if it was fleshed out properly. A few unimpressive tweens to the Ghostbusters theme isn't going to separate you from a lot of the noobish animation you're parodying in this case though.

Sonofgoku1 responds:

this is a learning experince. give me time. i'll improve. ;)

Right on.

Very nice. I love a good punchy short cartoon that's unpredictable.

Right on.

You've mastered good timing. Even when the jokes weren't particularly weird or funny, the quick flash of the credits logo never failed to get a chuckle out of me. It reminds me a bit of the random nature of those old Don Hertzfeldt short films. Great stuff.

Giant pigeon.

Very nice. The volume needs to be dropped though, it's a little static-y.

Very nice film.

This is one of the only 10's for humour I've ever given out, congrats.

I think you've got some damn good artistic style, some great scripting, well timed music, nice effects, I just think the voice acting was just a little sub-par compared to its other aspects. It's still miles better than average, but there's only so much stumbling over the word "accelerator" you should take before you outsource that work.

Meh.

You're not an idiot, and I'm not going to mock your values. I've read what you've had to say thus far and you seem like a reasonable person. This movie was just a big miss with me though, it really didn't express anything from the author.

WinchesterLock responds:

Well most of my thoughts got expressed after the actuall "flash" part of it. : \

What're we doing here?

I felt like I was watching Waiting for Godot for a minute or so. The other aspects that were spliced seemed out of touch with your style. I like an artistic abstract film as much as the next guy, but it doesn't mean to say I think like how this one was put together.
The first minute or so was very effective, I'd suggest starting from there and trying something different.

Robot-Lock responds:

Haha, you're so right, this movie was originally going to be a Lock version of Waiting for Godot, but instead i chose to do something diffrent.

Set it to the 21st century!

Another excellent addition to your series. I really get a kick out of them.

Your values are wrong.

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