Hmm...
There are no big problems with this short, but I really hoped it was going to go somewhere. It feels very mediocre--surprise us with something.
Hmm...
There are no big problems with this short, but I really hoped it was going to go somewhere. It feels very mediocre--surprise us with something.
I'm not really so violent type of guy, if you mean that. And I really wouldn't come up with anything else so suprising as something violent. Also my lacks of frame-by-frame animation and layernumber control doesn't really help with that.
Also, as this started out when I was listening tracks on the NG Audio Portal, hit this and started just doing something without any plots or summaries, not even with a minor, vague idea of what I was doing.
It was intented, though, to be a short, non-violent mediocre toon that won't be blammed. And I see I have matched my goals.
Thanks for the review.
-- sysrq868
Goddamn you Hades.
It's really weird that a song written to express the pains of chastity amongst monks are being used today for kids school projects.
It fared well, though every scene seemed to last 3 or 4 seconds longer than it needed to. The pacing seemed a little slow, given the content. It also really kinda skipped over the bulk of the content of the story. You did read the story, right?
i read the story and watched the movie but for he project was supposed to choose 4 main parts....
Damn you Lab 11!
Great job. Frontpage material. For...two days, let's say. Best I've seen this morning.
Thank you and Iam really glad you liked it!
Worth resubmitting after a month or so.
It's a nice idea which could develop into something quite entertaining if it was fleshed out properly. A few unimpressive tweens to the Ghostbusters theme isn't going to separate you from a lot of the noobish animation you're parodying in this case though.
this is a learning experince. give me time. i'll improve. ;)
Meh.
You're not an idiot, and I'm not going to mock your values. I've read what you've had to say thus far and you seem like a reasonable person. This movie was just a big miss with me though, it really didn't express anything from the author.
Well most of my thoughts got expressed after the actuall "flash" part of it. : \
Great!
Man, Eastern Europeans produce the best animations, I swear. I loved this.
Thanx a lot!
Your values are wrong.
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