Reserving the right to arm bears.
Damn you did a good job of this. Nice movie.
I wish it went a little further into some of those ammendments, you could have had some interesting legal paradoxes crop up...but all in all, solid work. The Hyena approves.
yeah, well, i was suppossed to only do the 1st 10. i better read more about those other amendments then. sounds interesting.
Hmm...
There are no big problems with this short, but I really hoped it was going to go somewhere. It feels very mediocre--surprise us with something.
I'm not really so violent type of guy, if you mean that. And I really wouldn't come up with anything else so suprising as something violent. Also my lacks of frame-by-frame animation and layernumber control doesn't really help with that.
Also, as this started out when I was listening tracks on the NG Audio Portal, hit this and started just doing something without any plots or summaries, not even with a minor, vague idea of what I was doing.
It was intented, though, to be a short, non-violent mediocre toon that won't be blammed. And I see I have matched my goals.
Thanks for the review.
-- sysrq868
Not bad.
Kinda throws me off when the Clock Crew get killed again and again and again. Goddamn clones.
Still, didn't get dull. The only thing worse than the tons of trends is the attempts to mimic them. I enjoyed this, for what it was worth.
Right on man. We're not gods, so we just did our best. And we'll definately take your 7.
-LP
Goddamn you Hades.
It's really weird that a song written to express the pains of chastity amongst monks are being used today for kids school projects.
It fared well, though every scene seemed to last 3 or 4 seconds longer than it needed to. The pacing seemed a little slow, given the content. It also really kinda skipped over the bulk of the content of the story. You did read the story, right?
i read the story and watched the movie but for he project was supposed to choose 4 main parts....
Spectacular!
Yeahhhhhhh, onto my favourite authors list you go. It's refreshing to see someone who actually chooses their music well and puts thought into the text on the screen. You make David Inouye's apocolypic Newgrounds visions seem very dull-minded in comparison.
Wow, thats quite a compliment. Ive seen Inouye's stuff- And I appreciate the kind words, thankyou.
Damn you Lab 11!
Great job. Frontpage material. For...two days, let's say. Best I've seen this morning.
Thank you and Iam really glad you liked it!
Worth resubmitting after a month or so.
It's a nice idea which could develop into something quite entertaining if it was fleshed out properly. A few unimpressive tweens to the Ghostbusters theme isn't going to separate you from a lot of the noobish animation you're parodying in this case though.
this is a learning experince. give me time. i'll improve. ;)
Meh.
You're not an idiot, and I'm not going to mock your values. I've read what you've had to say thus far and you seem like a reasonable person. This movie was just a big miss with me though, it really didn't express anything from the author.
Well most of my thoughts got expressed after the actuall "flash" part of it. : \
What're we doing here?
I felt like I was watching Waiting for Godot for a minute or so. The other aspects that were spliced seemed out of touch with your style. I like an artistic abstract film as much as the next guy, but it doesn't mean to say I think like how this one was put together.
The first minute or so was very effective, I'd suggest starting from there and trying something different.
Haha, you're so right, this movie was originally going to be a Lock version of Waiting for Godot, but instead i chose to do something diffrent.
Great!
Man, Eastern Europeans produce the best animations, I swear. I loved this.
Thanx a lot!
Your values are wrong.
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